Friday, 6 March 2009

silence we shared...

it was while you were sleeping
that i stood by the door
secretly peeking
as the moon
cast its white sheen
on your dreamy face

it was while you were sleeping
that i felt
the softness of your cheeks
the smile on your face
the ruffled hair
messed up in the pillow

it was while you were sleeping
that i whispered in your ear
and something twinkled in my eye
i smiled to myself
i don't know why...

it was while you were sleeping
that a song came along
being played outside
somewhere in the distance
into the dark night

it was while you were sleeping
that i ran out of words
stared out the window
while the moon hung in the sky
i sat there praying
for the night to last long



p.s i have no idea where this came from : /


38 comments:

misspecs said...

"it was while you were sleeping
that i ran out of words
stared out the window
while the moon hung in the sky
i sat there praying
for the night to last long"


You took me away with those.

m.h.a said...

For someone who says she doesn't understand love, atleast you're taking a step into the realms of love and accessories...congratulations...Lol...though mubi lets be honest isn't this is a little cheesy?

Mubi said...

specy, thanks

mha, lol. i tried keeping it off the cheesy track :p and hey you are telling me i am being cheesy? take a look at ur fb status dude :p

[[[ x Smiley x ]]] said...

ohMyLord!

*speechless*

this is simply beautiful Mubi.

ps: love ur profile picture =]

¤Ü•B¤ said...

am speechless yaar

i can never right the way u do !!

ME IN LOVE WITH U !!! :p

americanising desi said...

it came from deep within the nurture you hold :)
yes yes!!! it is an ode to being woman :)

Mubi said...

smiley, aw thanks girl!

Ubee, um well ya you cant 'right' the way i 'write' :p

desi,aw thats such a nice way to put it:D

m.h.a said...

Han na to i am all cheesy and btw facebook is separate stuff lol...and i only said i'm in love, i didn't say i'm in love and i cant sleep and i watch you sleeping and the moonlight on your face :p...sorry couldn't resist

Mubi said...

@ mha, even if it is a separate thing, the cheesy factor remains.and i think you are forgetting all the comments you wrote there,that adds to the 'cheeziness' :p
at least i have contained 'cheesy' to a genre of literature :D

m.h.a said...

Haha...

*Points two fingers at you* i like your style.

m.h.a said...

Btw i really like your dp wait till i accessorize my wrist you're gonna burn...i'm looking for a perfect dp somehow i cant bring myself to replace this one its such a sweet memory :(

m.h.a said...

I mean the profile picture

Zeeshan Sattar said...

"it was while you were sleeping
that i ran out of words
stared out the window
while the moon hung in the sky
i sat there praying
for the night to last long"


this last stanza is the most beautiful one

Mubi said...

@ mha, :S you like my style? :p thanks...and lol no way, i m not gona burn if a guy is going to accessorize his wrist :p so go ahead, work on it..and ya your current dp..its cute


Zee, hmm seems like the last one has worked for most of you :D thanks

¤Ü•B¤ said...

oh yaar sorry typo ho gaya tha :p !!

hfm said...

I love how you don't know where this came from, it reminds me of me- I write stuff that doesn't always come from emotions of my own. They're snippets of lives around me which I feel that my words can relate to.Make sense?
:)

hfm said...

I wanna accessorize my wrists too and put it as my dp.
I'm such a sheep.
:p

uglyduckling91 said...

I'd paste the last stanza here laikin udhar zyada acha lag raha hai. =s
I'm confused now. =|~ Sorry. Lol!

Yes! The last stanze was awesome. Esp the last two line. WEeeeeeeeeeeooooooo o_O

I like the new header. =D And the clour. =D~

m.h.a said...

I like your style is a dialogue you're such a tubelight, i hate explaining one liners...anyways, hmmm, how about i accessorize my goatee? You'll burn then? Lol...atleast hfm you cant grow a goatee, neither you...haina?? Haha..so i'm at an advantage there...but yes mubi you guessed it i wanted you to praise my picture...:p :p...Acha Nae Nae i was still thinking k kya karun kon c pic lagaoon.

Mubi said...

rainy, exactly! you have put it the right way for me :D

beaugly, thanks for noticing the header :D

mha, you are so mean :/ as for you 'goats' and 'cows':S do you realize that girls would have no interest if you accessorize it or not :s
and ya stick to the post, would appreciate that :D

m.h.a said...

You know you're mean.

Summer Cutee said...

whoooaaa!!! time out kids...nap time :P

Summer Cutee said...

and ur poem reminds me of my future babiess!! :D

lost in rome said...

no matter where it came from its too good yar..

n i likes ur new picture if thats whatits called

Mubi said...

mha, totally ignored *rolls eyes*

summer, hmm its open to interpretations :D

lost, hehe ya the header. thanks for both.

Daanish said...

amazingly beautiful thought in simple and heart touching words.
wonderful.............:)

BoogieMonsterMan said...

iShifted!
www.boogiemonsterman.blogspot.com

UTP said...

that was amazing...wherever it came from...

Mubi said...

daanish and Utp, thanks. m glad you visited :)

and boogiemonster, your shift noticed :D

DuFFeR ڈفرستان ۔ said...

absolutely marvelous

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misspecs said...

You've been awarded for great attitude. :D

xox

Calm Cool said...

hello from me, after a long gap :)
first of all: good dp.
second: nice post, i wish i could express my feelings too in such a beautiful way.
third: "One ship sails East, and another west"
thought provoking!
n pretty in the sense of ur font color selection n pic .
n finaly see ya :)

cavaliere84 said...

The fluency, I like that.
It wasn't cheesy by my standards at least !

saadil said...

Beautiful and soothing!

A good one!

Mubi said...

Dee, thanks!

Ghazala, thanks :)

calm, good to see you:) thanks for the dp, the posts :D

cavalier, hehe you have made my day. and welcome to the blog :D

saadil, :) keep visiting

An ILLuS|On said...

loved reading mubi..loved it!

aliwriteshere said...

Loved this one!

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