Friday, 19 December 2008

The lost wind caged in a bubble...

A long battle had been fought...
A voice, distant and tired, thoughtfully asked: "what battle?"

Reality came crashing down on the rotten, lifeless menagerie. Menageries are lifeless, glass, tiny.....insignificant.

"There was no war, there was no action. The sounds and screams, the blood and flesh was all part of the game."
who won?
"who won what?" the distant and dry voice inquired.
Impatiently she replied- "the game you mentioned "--- silence, a pin dropped and echoed in the skies, among the clouds....and the glass broke. The sound felt like a melody- quick rain of tiny shattered glass came down....silence
"the game is not finished..."
can i come too?
The menagerie's fragile voice faded behind the sound of the game....
no winners, no losers...only fools

19 comments:

Abdul Sami said...

u messed up your fonts :P !!!

Mubi said...

umm i think i didnt...

seher's shenanigans said...

.... no winners, no losers...only fools
VERY WELL SAIDDDD!!! it just is so sad, but thank God we understand!

Abdul Sami said...

no u don't understand...

YOU DID :P !!!

exquisite said...

wow! ...

the inference at the end is a shocker :S !

abdlsy said...

hello and Eid mubaruk to: THE VIEW BEHIND MY SPECKY ASS

m.h.a said...

So true, the last line is so real yar...but how few people in this world truly remember it...
I likes the post.

Daanish said...

"The lost wind cagged in a bubble"
even just this caption,very insightful !

UTP said...

no wonder this blog is rated R for RANDOMNESS....

Rickety Arts said...

Love the last line

"The menagerie's fragile voice faded behind the sound of the game.... no winners, no losers...only fools"


nicely written

ڈفر said...

the idea to post is perfect ;)

hfm said...

A long battle had been fought...
A voice, distant and tired, thoughtfully asked: "what battle?"
Reality came crashing down on the rotten, lifeless menagerie. Menageries are lifeless, glass, tiny.....insignificant.
"There was no war, there was no action. The sounds and screams, the blood and flesh was all part of the game."
who won?
"who won what?" the distant and dry voice inquired.
Impatiently she replied- "the game you mentioned "--- silence, a pin dropped and echoed in the skies, among the clouds....and the glass broke. The sound felt like a melody- quick rain of tiny shattered glass came down....silence
"the game is not finished..."
can i come too?
The menagerie's fragile voice faded behind the sound of the game.... no winners, no losers...only fools


I copied and pasted it for those who can't be bothered.
I really think that is an emotion we all experience but can't express as well as you have.

hfm said...

P.S Don't you mean 'caged' in your title?
Sorry to be such a spelling bee, but thought it was just a silly typo you might like to change.
:)

uglyduckling said...

omg :|

Mubi said...

seher, i dont think we really understand..or if we do, we easily let it slip..

smacula, thank you

exquisite,,i like the shocker ;)

abdlsy, hmm indeed very thoughtful of you, khair mubarak

mha, thanks

daanish, i was thinking 'wild wind' would have been more appropriate, what say?

UTP, hehe, i think i will take your comment as a compliment!

rickety, thank you for visiting my blog :) hope to see more of you

Dee, :)

rainy, oo thank you so much for pointing that out.m glad you are a spelling bee and that reminds me i once lost my spelling competition lol :$

beaugly, :|

Calm Cool said...

i really liked it, its sort of ... ummm... ok i give up, i can't find words rite now it made me so thoughtful :$
agreed to hfm :"I really think that is an emotion we all experience but can't express as well as you have."

Azra said...

LOL...I love the Randomness banner

Mubi said...

calm. hehehe did it really make you think :p :$

azra, thanks to exquisite for the banner and thanks to me too since i chose this one from among the ones he made :D :D

to the one who clicked on the 'funny' reaction option for this post :S umm really? this post could qualify for absurd or disturbing but funny? ;p

m.h.a said...

You know peace is really important. Yet sometimes its not indispensable!

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